Writing 2

It was very interesting to observe the writing process again this week. I did not get to tutor any tutee as such but I was looking over other tutor's counseling. This was a proper tutor appointment unlike the last one and the tutee was very organized in terms of addressing his concerns about his paper. He knew where he probably lacked in clarity and asked the writer how he could be more clear so that his paragraphs would flow better.

Tutor also looked over the rest of his paper just to make sure and pointed out a few grammatical errors that made the thoughts flow consistently. It was structured reasonably well already but it certainly needed to be cleared from irrelevant details that were pointed out by the tutor. Overall, it was a good session and I plan to actually tutor a person next time I walk in:)